Sep 11 post

 Today we revised the body paragraphs from yesterday. I  enjoyed revising and making improvements to my work. Mr Rease helped me out a lot and I was able to make my writing a lot better.  I had trouble seeing some things and he wanted me to correct and why but I was able to figure it out and not use contractions as well.

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